Leaf Fell Upon.

see the love,
leaf fell upon the dusk;
children whistle (a little whistle in rain)
and the shudders of grass
sputter–sputter—-sputter
none more blithe than any guesses,
but, must seem upon the miles away. away.
dust and dusk surmise,
ends are all bested before
nightly and I might, nightly tide,
ordering oneself to sleep and soon.

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3 replies

  1. Ooooh I really like this one! The imagery is so pretty and it’s easy to find a story from my mind that can fit the scene, whilst I feel someone else’s story is written under the words as well, mingled into every line. It’s so pretty, great job!

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    • Aww, thank you Gabby. I’m so glad you like this. To me, with how I wrote it, it’s a simple poem that describes a scenery and it’s the sort of connection that can reach everyone differently. I visualized this as scenery in the fall and describing it; I just love the autumn and the color of leaves. There can be different themes within each line (and the more I read this poem back, I see themes I haven’t even thought of), and it’s just how it connects to others. Thank you for your feedback and I’m happy you enjoyed reading this. 🙂

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      • Wow, thats such a beautiful meaning and theme of the piece! Me too, especially Autumns up North, the falling leaves and wispy air creates such a magical scene! Thank you for sharing the meaning with me, it definitely enlightens the poem and allows me to see it from a different perspective now! 🙂

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