Hidden.

Hidden in senses,
we, alone, are disenchanted
in the sleep blue mist,
as an expanse of ghosts
and dreams never had.

Leave behind our minds,
the dispensation of a white trance
in the universe;
leave behind the resinous trees
secreting mist
where no space is left.

The shadows of our mind,
displaced in amber,
consumed in a streaked world
with skeletal memories left
to leave me alone with you.

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A/N: I’m also hosting a poem collaboration here. Join in on the fun!


  26 comments for “Hidden.

  1. March 31, 2020 at 8:58 am

    Such a great poem Lucy! Loved it!

    Liked by 3 people

    • March 31, 2020 at 9:06 am

      Thanks! So glad you enjoyed reading it. ❤️

      Liked by 1 person

  2. March 31, 2020 at 9:50 am

    Sublime and perfect, Lucy thanks for sharing friend be safe and healthy xoxo

    Liked by 3 people

    • March 31, 2020 at 9:51 am

      Thank you so, so much. ❤️❤️ Stay healthy and safe too.

      Like

  3. March 31, 2020 at 12:20 pm

    I enjoyed this poem so much I read it four times to make sure I saw/heard it all.

    Liked by 2 people

    • March 31, 2020 at 12:44 pm

      Oh, wow! I’m so happy you liked it that much. Thank you for reading it. 😃

      Like

  4. March 31, 2020 at 2:05 pm

    I am not very good with poetry … mine will be very childlike lol … but I will see if I can come up with something… has anyone else shared? I saw the start that you did, is there more to lead off of yet?

    Liked by 1 person

    • March 31, 2020 at 2:10 pm

      Lol. Don’t worry about it. Everyone’s style is different—that’s what makes poetry so enjoyable to me, being able to read different writing styles.

      And yes! Others have shared their contributions. It’s been mainly through the google forms document, but there’s a few in the comments section too.

      If you do decide to participate, I’d love to read your entry! ❤️

      Liked by 1 person

  5. March 31, 2020 at 3:46 pm

    I feel like some partings are like this… prolonged and stretched infinitely thin… maybe it’s a bond that will never really break

    Liked by 2 people

    • March 31, 2020 at 3:51 pm

      Very true! In the end, sometimes we just have the memories of it left. Thank you very much for your thoughts and feedback. It is greatly appreciated.

      Like

  6. March 31, 2020 at 4:13 pm

    Beautiful – the resinous trees, I can smell them.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Rhen Laird
    March 31, 2020 at 9:50 pm

    I joined the collaboration, fun!

    Liked by 1 person

    • March 31, 2020 at 9:58 pm

      Yes! I received your submission the other day. So glad you joined. 😃
      It is a fantastic contribution concerning the theme, and I love the meaning behind it. Excellent piece.

      Like

      • Rhen Laird
        March 31, 2020 at 10:06 pm

        Oh my, I didn’t know you’d gotten it already–thank you So Much for the compliment, dear Lucy 🙂 ❤

        Liked by 1 person

  8. April 1, 2020 at 5:58 am

    Reblogged this on Art, Photography and Poetry.

    Liked by 2 people

  9. April 1, 2020 at 6:01 am

    Hi, Lucy. Thanks for sharing such a beautifully penned poem imbued with wonderful imagery. I have reblogged. Happy Wednesday. Stay Safe.

    Liked by 1 person

  10. April 1, 2020 at 6:18 am

    Beautiful poetry Lucy. Thank you.❤🙏

    Liked by 2 people

    • April 1, 2020 at 6:56 am

      Thank you so much. ❤️

      Like

  11. April 1, 2020 at 11:54 pm

    Lovely! ❣️

    Liked by 1 person

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