Lonely.

lonely, born in the ecstasy

this root of blood;

walk away into

the forbidden, unmade road

split and wounded,

eternally with revived memory,

the stranger of winter shadows

into the dark planetary motion,

the insanity picked from flowers

will too go on

as we walk away.

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  39 comments for “Lonely.

  1. April 12, 2020 at 7:41 am

    Quite unsettling…

    Liked by 3 people

  2. blindzanygirl
    April 12, 2020 at 7:48 am

    This conveys a very deep dark mood Lucy. But so true for some. I like this very much

    Liked by 4 people

    • April 12, 2020 at 7:48 am

      Thank you so much. ❤️

      Liked by 1 person

      • blindzanygirl
        April 12, 2020 at 7:53 am

        You are very welcome. Thankyou so much for your amazing poetry.

        Liked by 1 person

      • April 12, 2020 at 7:56 am

        ❤️❤️😊

        Like

  3. April 12, 2020 at 7:51 am

    Awesome.

    Liked by 2 people

  4. April 12, 2020 at 8:56 am

    so it is and always shall be

    Liked by 3 people

  5. April 12, 2020 at 9:51 am

    This is such a powerful poem. I’ve nominated you for an award. Please check my blog for more information!❤️

    Liked by 2 people

  6. April 12, 2020 at 12:14 pm

    Dark and deep, this is truly something good. I was wondering, have you been a fan of writing such poetry or stories before?

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    • April 12, 2020 at 12:46 pm

      Thank you so much!
      And yes, I think I always have been. I’ve been writing for a good five years now (give or take), though mainly poetry. 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  7. April 12, 2020 at 12:27 pm

    This is beautiful within the depths of the soul.

    Liked by 3 people

  8. April 12, 2020 at 2:36 pm

    Love that line, “the forbidden unmade road.” Nice work Lucy!

    Liked by 3 people

  9. April 12, 2020 at 7:09 pm

    Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:

    DEEP!

    Liked by 2 people

  10. April 12, 2020 at 9:08 pm

    Very fine poem. Your line “insanity picked from flowers” is striking. Thank you.

    Liked by 3 people

    • April 12, 2020 at 10:14 pm

      Thank you so much.

      Like

  11. April 14, 2020 at 11:26 am

    Loneliness is always the most terrible of acceptances. The parting between the one we loved and us, is a wound of distance that is so hard to mend.

    We bleed between each other, from one person to the next, when the wind carries more-so the sight of it, over the stench of the oncoming infection.

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    • April 14, 2020 at 12:49 pm

      Very true thoughts, my friend. Your words also read as good prose.

      But, yes, I agree. Loneliness is one of the worst feelings to have, and that at the heart of it, we truly need people to connect with throughout our lives.

      Thank you for your feedback. I greatly appreciate it. 🙂

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  12. April 23, 2020 at 9:53 pm

    Wow…speaks to the depths of life in many ways.

    Liked by 2 people

  13. May 26, 2020 at 7:41 am

    Is this one by you? Dark…brooding… omniscient. I really liked the two lines: “the stranger of winter shadows”

    “the insanity picked from flowers”

    I liked reading them out loud… Maybe it’s my present mind but it’s like the virus… Gotten so easily, therein lies its menace…. Like insanity from merely picking flowers.

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    • May 26, 2020 at 8:21 am

      Yep, it is by me. I am so glad you enjoyed this piece.

      That is such an intriguing connection that you’ve made with that line with the pandemic. It really does make sense in that context.

      Thank you for your thoughts and feedback. I appreciate it very much. 😃

      Like

  14. May 26, 2020 at 10:04 am

    What a beautiful piece of work.

    Liked by 2 people

  15. Rhen Laird
    May 26, 2020 at 11:14 pm

    WOW, Lucy–this one echoes on… 5-Star!

    Like

    • May 26, 2020 at 11:16 pm

      Thank you so much! ❤️❤️❤️

      Like

      • Rhen Laird
        May 26, 2020 at 11:20 pm

        You are hugely welcome 🙂 !!!

        Like

      • Rhen Laird
        May 26, 2020 at 11:37 pm

        You’re welcome💖💖💖💖💖

        Like

      • Rhen Laird
        May 27, 2020 at 6:09 am

        💖

        Liked by 1 person

  16. June 16, 2020 at 8:47 am

    lovely word. Thanks for sharing.

    Liked by 1 person

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