death in the ocean.

Death in the ocean only comes once upon

the prose tree in my mind, there is a darkness

in the lithe stillness of autumn oaks now gone,

               as olive flowers; a fantasy heartless

in horizon by Rome hills, a sea of loss

     is what we lost before to the ebbing across

the fight of mind, let it turn away and leave;

     the echo of the dream, in darkness of eve.

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Written for MMA Storytime’s Rispetto Poetry Prompt Challenge #1.

A Rispetto is a specific rhyming Italian poetic form that has eight lines with eleven syllables throughout each line.

Word for prompt: Fight.


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    1. Thank you! This challenge was really fun, and I’ve never written in an Italian poetic form before so it was neat to experiment. I also thank you for creating the challenge! I very well might become a regular for your poetry prompts. 😀

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        1. It’s been slow on the uptake, but hopefully some new chapters will be coming soon. We still got time on it since it won’t end until late August.

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    1. Aww, I thank you so much Katy. That makes me happy to hear that. 🥰 This was quite a difficult form to write in. I don’t do traditional forms typically in my poetry, though I’m always up for a challenge. All in all, it was pretty fun!

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