Visual Verse Publication.

My piece, “I leave in a deeper silence” was published in Visual Verse for their current chapter. This is my first publication with them. It is written under my main pseudonym, and you can read the poem here.

My utmost gratitude and thanks to Visual Verse for accepting my piece. More so, be sure to check their anthology out as it’s still ongoing.

Thoughts and feedback are always appreciated. Thank you for reading.

  66 comments for “Visual Verse Publication.

  1. July 6, 2020 at 11:17 am

    This poem is a fantastic response to the prompt – very powerful – thanks for posting!

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  2. July 6, 2020 at 11:56 am

    I really like the tone of it. It seems very authentic, yet you still kept a very stylish kind of story-telling while writing it. I love how raw it is; as well as the mention of Lazarus, which has a deep story in itself, and that you are not afraid to be honest in your writing. The line ‘I am not blinded but wounded’ is so tragically beautiful.
    All in all, very well done. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

    xoxo

    Reverieinsight

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    • July 6, 2020 at 12:48 pm

      Thank you so, so much for your feedback and analysis. I feel very humbled and honored by your words.

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      • July 6, 2020 at 2:47 pm

        You seem so humble and down to earth. But also very rational. That’s what makes your poetry to special – you are authentic, yet stylish. You definitely are one of a kind.

        xoxo

        Reverinsight

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      • July 6, 2020 at 2:51 pm

        I have no words. Thank you dearly, thank you so much. ❤️❤️❤️ You have made my day.

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  3. July 6, 2020 at 2:35 pm

    Beautiful piece Lucy. Congratulations!

    Liked by 1 person

    • July 6, 2020 at 2:52 pm

      Thank you, my dear! I am so glad you enjoyed this piece. ❤️

      Liked by 1 person

    • July 6, 2020 at 2:56 pm

      No need to thank me as my keyboard is very sticky today and my review from earlier on showed this unfortunately. I poured orange juice all over it. I’m glad my notebook survived this massacre!

      Liked by 2 people

  4. July 6, 2020 at 3:30 pm

    Bravo ❤️

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  5. July 6, 2020 at 4:03 pm

    Congratulations! May your words never cease to flow.

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  6. July 6, 2020 at 4:27 pm

    Congratulations, Lucy. Well deserved

    Liked by 1 person

  7. July 6, 2020 at 4:58 pm

    Hey

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    • July 6, 2020 at 4:58 pm

      I need to ask you a couple of questions

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      • July 6, 2020 at 5:02 pm

        Hi! Ask away.

        Like

      • July 6, 2020 at 6:07 pm

        Is there any way for you to message me. I have been offline for a while. And I am having trouble getting back in the groove with my site

        Liked by 1 person

      • July 6, 2020 at 6:27 pm

        Not on WordPress, no. I don’t see you have a contact page either on your blog.

        Why don’t you reach out to me on my contact page? Or if you’re not comfortable with that, you can message me on Twitter with any questions you have. My username is @LucysWorks

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  8. mariamichaela
    July 7, 2020 at 6:56 am

    Congratulations, Lucy! 🌹

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  9. July 7, 2020 at 9:17 am

    A wonderfully thought provoking poem 💖✨💕

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  10. July 7, 2020 at 9:21 am

    Congrats Lucy👌🏾

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  11. July 7, 2020 at 11:26 am

    Hello there! Congratulations on the publication! I’m reaching out to let you know that I’ve nominated you for the Ideal Inspiration Blogger Award. You can check out the post and rules @ https://bit.ly/2BFlXS2.

    Liked by 1 person

    • July 7, 2020 at 12:30 pm

      Thank you earnestly for the kind comment and nomination. I unfortunately do not do awards on my site anymore but I am honored by your nomination.

      Liked by 1 person

  12. July 7, 2020 at 7:33 pm

    Congrats!

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Joy
    July 8, 2020 at 10:57 am

    Congratulations! I love the dark imagery!

    Liked by 1 person

  14. July 8, 2020 at 8:17 pm

    Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:

    STEPPING UP IN THE LITERARY WORLD! PAGES ONE CAN HOLD AND READ IT—AND PROUDLY SHARE IT ‘ROUND! YOWZA!

    Liked by 1 person

    • July 8, 2020 at 8:24 pm

      Aww, thank you, thank you so much my friend. That means so much to me to hear. ❤ ❤

      Liked by 1 person

      • July 8, 2020 at 8:30 pm

        I KNOW THE FEELING! 😀

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      • July 8, 2020 at 9:34 pm

        ❤️

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      • July 8, 2020 at 9:43 pm

        I HAD A BOOK OF CHRISTIAN POETRY IN PRINT 2011—VIA A VANITY-STYLE PUBLISHER.

        Liked by 1 person

      • July 8, 2020 at 9:49 pm

        Wow! That’s awesome. My belated congratulations. Would you have a link to it? I’d love to give it a read.

        Liked by 1 person

      • July 8, 2020 at 10:22 pm

        I’LL SEE WHAT I CAN FIND.

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      • July 9, 2020 at 12:13 am

        ACTUALLY…it’s not online. But Amazon.com might still have copies (or a version for their propriety Reader) Title is…SPIRIT-LED LIMERICKS AND OTHER CHRISTIAN POETRY, by Jonathan Caswell….there are or were a couple “Jonathan Caswell’s and similar-sounding books. It looks like this: https://m.media-amazon.com/images/I/610nPV8cHqL.AC_UY218.jpg

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      • July 9, 2020 at 12:37 am

        I’ll check it out. 🙂

        Liked by 2 people

      • July 9, 2020 at 10:33 am

        WROTE A POST YESTERDAY—“POETRY BOOK FOR SALE”–WITH DIRECT LINK TO THAT PAGE ON AMAZON. “TELL YOUR FRIENDS”!

        Liked by 1 person

  15. July 10, 2020 at 11:42 am

    Congratulations!
    ❤️ ❣️ ❤️

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  16. July 11, 2020 at 9:11 am

    Congratulations, Lucy. Your poem is so moving and I love the way Visual Verse presents it. Keep up the beautiful work.

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  17. July 14, 2020 at 6:46 am

    Hi there Lucy. Congratulations on your selection, your poem is amazing you basically didn’t give Visual Verse any choice either than to accept it for publication…anyways, I just dropped by to let you know that I’ve nominated you for the Ideal Inspiration Blogger Award. Hopefully, you don’t mind.
    Here’s the link https://thepoetspeace.wordpress.com/2020/07/13/ideal-inspiration-blogger-award/

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    • July 14, 2020 at 7:14 am

      Thank you so much not only for the lovely comment but as well the nomination. ☺️ You’re too kind.

      Liked by 1 person

  18. July 14, 2020 at 7:06 am

    Deep and powerful verse with impactful imagery throughout! Congratulations on its publication too!

    Liked by 1 person

  19. July 14, 2020 at 9:12 pm

    Congratulations, Lucy! I read the poem, and it is a very fine piece of writing,
    as are all your beautiful poems.

    Liked by 1 person

    • July 14, 2020 at 9:19 pm

      Aww, thank you so much for your lovely comment. I am beyond humbled and honored by your words!

      Like

  20. July 15, 2020 at 7:13 am

    This is such a powerful and evocative poem, Lucy!
    “I leave
    in a deeper silence
    alone to the fossils without a place
    and to the thought of others…”
    These words will haunt me for days…

    Liked by 1 person

    • July 15, 2020 at 8:54 am

      Oh wow, I’m so flattered by your words. ☺️ Thank you so much, Veronica. That means a lot.

      Liked by 1 person

      • July 15, 2020 at 11:34 pm

        You are most welcome, Lucy! Your masterful experimentation with form and style always inspires me. 😌

        Liked by 1 person

      • July 16, 2020 at 12:00 am

        Oh, wow. I am truly honored to hear that. You made my day. ❤ ❤ Thank you again so much.

        I’ve read some of your poetry and it’s just amazing. I especially love your sonnets; your writing is as well inspiring to me.

        Liked by 1 person

      • July 16, 2020 at 12:17 am

        Thank you for the kind words, Lucy! You made my day, as well. ☺️💌

        Liked by 1 person

  21. July 18, 2020 at 9:55 am

    Congratulations!!! It’s truly beautiful. ❤️

    Liked by 1 person

  22. July 21, 2020 at 1:30 am

    Hey, thanks for liking one of my poems 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

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