to in a dream.

has died,

beautiful dreamer;

the sea is a language

of loneliness,

legs struck in the waves

to the break

of oaks

and I finally arrived

to the holes

in the ocean,

to in a dream

I’ve left behind.

© 2020 lucysworks.com All Rights Reserved.


A/N: Written in response to the Go Dog Go Cafe’s prompt: Use “beautiful dreamer” in a piece of poetry or prose.


  24 comments for “to in a dream.

  1. June 10, 2020 at 1:48 am

    very nice.

    Liked by 3 people

    • June 10, 2020 at 2:16 am

      Thank you so much.

      Like

  2. June 10, 2020 at 6:22 pm

    Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:

    WELL PUT 😀

    Liked by 2 people

  3. June 12, 2020 at 4:31 pm

    I like this a lot! Brava!

    Liked by 3 people

    • June 12, 2020 at 4:35 pm

      Thank you! ❤ ❤

      Like

  4. June 13, 2020 at 12:02 am

    Hi Lucy, Please check our last post! You have been nominated for an award. Have a nice day! 😍

    Liked by 3 people

  5. A.M
    July 9, 2020 at 1:14 pm

    Amazing!

    Liked by 3 people

  6. Guiltless Passion
    July 19, 2020 at 6:11 pm

    Love🙌🏼

    Liked by 1 person

  7. July 19, 2020 at 10:44 pm

    Lucy, this is gorgeous.
    “in a dream
    I’ve left behind.”
    It is a dream full of beauty and longing. Bravo sweetheart.
    Hugs
    G.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. July 20, 2020 at 12:03 am

    You are a beautiful dreamer…. I must say….

    Liked by 1 person

  9. July 20, 2020 at 8:44 am

    Loved the way the words flowed as one wave 🌊

    Liked by 1 person

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