28 comments for “a sea dying.

  1. August 14, 2020 at 7:28 am

    very profound Lucy and a visual artistry of meaning thank you for sharing friend xo

    • August 14, 2020 at 8:45 am

      Aww, thank you mb!

  2. August 14, 2020 at 8:51 am

    Good one, Lucy! 😀💖💕💞

    • August 14, 2020 at 8:57 am

      Thank you! 😊

  3. August 14, 2020 at 9:18 am

    There is a melancholy beauty to this poem. It reads out loud beautifully.

    • August 14, 2020 at 9:19 am

      Thank you so much. 💗

      • August 14, 2020 at 9:20 am

        My pleasure.

  4. Lia
    August 14, 2020 at 9:41 am

    Utterly beautiful!!

    • August 14, 2020 at 10:14 am

      Thank you! 😃

      • Lia
        August 14, 2020 at 10:17 am

        The imagery and word choice are extraordinary!! 👌💛

      • August 14, 2020 at 10:22 am

        ❤️❤️❤️🥰

  5. August 14, 2020 at 10:23 am

    Ah, Lucy, this is another splendid poem. It speaks to the sea in my heart. Your words are beautiful waves. I can feel their softness. I can feel their sadness.
    and a sea
    dying
    finds me alone.
    Beautiful…

    • August 14, 2020 at 10:25 am

      Oh, G, thank you SO much. I’m beyond happy you enjoyed this poem. ❤️🥰

      • August 14, 2020 at 10:28 am

        I love this poem with all my heart 🤗🌹🤗🌹

      • August 14, 2020 at 10:29 am

        ❤️❤️💗🥰

  6. August 14, 2020 at 9:46 pm

    Been off for a few days loved to come back to this👏🏼. Beautiful

    • August 14, 2020 at 10:29 pm

      Oh, wow. Thank you so, so much. 😀

  7. August 15, 2020 at 8:17 am

    Very nice

    • August 15, 2020 at 8:20 am

      Thank you!

  8. August 16, 2020 at 7:03 pm

    This poem speaks to my 4am self that lies awake listening to the sea roaring while wild winds blow.

    • August 16, 2020 at 7:58 pm

      That actually sounds quite pleasant! I’m glad my poem could speak to you. <3 <3

  9. August 17, 2020 at 7:39 am

    Thank you for liking my lil poem from before. I hope you also enjoyed the little song-request I performed at the bottom. I’ve always found music and poetry have gone hand-in-paw (one may be more ferocious/gripping). These are fantastic words and sounds you’ve written, I look forward to reading more!

    • August 17, 2020 at 8:14 am

      I enjoyed them both greatly. Music and poetry mix very well. Thank you for your kind words and for checking out the site as well. I’m also looking forward to reading more of your content.

      Cheers.

  10. August 17, 2020 at 11:03 pm

    I like this one so much

    • August 17, 2020 at 11:14 pm

      I’m so glad to hear that! <3

  11. August 23, 2020 at 1:58 pm

    Wonderful words, evokes such beautiful imagery!!

    • August 23, 2020 at 3:01 pm

      Thank you so much!

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