I leave in a deeper silence.

Death among a void,
             existence into the throat
of the flowers; but what is it about
the death of verse and prose
into the saurian rocks
             and night of memory
not myself? Quiet as baby’s breath.
             The fall of man
is a rarity from fear and falsity
             but as poetically a delusion
to capture in the snow like a child;
I reach to open my eyes
             to the tenor and tomb of
a sleep like Lazarus of the dead;
the cold exult, the connectivity
of mind is not reached, for language
             does not trace to the old trees
a forward of understanding.
The dark light
             stumbles in the topology
to the axis of beauty, oh, but it is not dead,
             in the arms of water
perched over lost prayers
in dark churches;
I am not blinded but wounded
             like a child of snow
who lies by the mouth of poets
             who leave their shadows
to the song.

I leave
in a deeper silence
             alone to the fossils without a place
                            and to the thought of others…
the ice pick at feet
to each other from each other;
therefore, death without a name
             but us.

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First appeared in Volume Seven of Visual Verse Anthology.


  35 comments for “I leave in a deeper silence.

  1. September 6, 2020 at 9:03 am

    “Beauty” is a topic that I like to rehearse and rewrite on, over again. It’s the only thing in the world that represents sheer vulnerability. It is always fragile, always weak, always in need of protection. Like a mother protecting her child. Like an organization protecting some endangered species. Beauty is always the protected, of things able to easily break. Though, why do we protect beauty? It’s out of love, that we protect beauty.

    Things able to be broken, are easily cherished. Things able to be dismantled, are easily preserved. The ones who wish to destroy beauty, are those who cannot understand life. They cannot understand it, because life is the same as beauty. Temporary. Both beauty and life are only ephemeral in our preservation of it.

    I write of this, because your poem reminds me a lot of how beauty falls, and how beauty rises. Like life, it falls and also rises. Knowledge, to the raising and the maintenance of beauty and life. Ignorance, to the destruction and negligence of beauty and life.

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    • September 6, 2020 at 9:06 am

      Whoops.

      Used an improper word.

      “Ephemeral”. Thought its definition referred to “eternity”.

      Ah, well…

      Replace it with “eternal”. 😀

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      • September 6, 2020 at 1:33 pm

        Such great thoughts and I agree with you very much. I find “ephemeral” to be more fitting in its context because we can actively destroy what we should hold dear to us, such as life.

        But, I understand what you mean. I thank you for your feedback and as well for reading my piece. ❤

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  2. September 6, 2020 at 9:03 am

    Beautiful lines

    Liked by 2 people

    • September 6, 2020 at 1:33 pm

      Thank you, Kamal!

      Like

  3. September 6, 2020 at 9:31 am

    This is a masterpiece, Lucy. The meanings… the metaphors.. the atmospheric quality..
    The finale is superb
    “I leave
    in a deeper silence
    alone to the fossils without a place
    and to the thought of others…
    the ice pick at feet
    to each other from each other;
    therefore, death without a name
    but us.”
    WOW.

    Liked by 3 people

    • September 6, 2020 at 1:34 pm

      G, I thank you dearly from the bottom of my heart. It’s such a joy to read your kind thoughts. Thank you, my friend. Thank you. ❤ ❤

      Liked by 1 person

      • September 6, 2020 at 1:35 pm

        My pleasure sweetheart. It’s really a masterpiece ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

        Liked by 1 person

  4. September 6, 2020 at 10:22 am

    You write so beautifully, Lucy. This is amazing! 😊

    Liked by 2 people

  5. Madame Hellshadow and friends
    September 6, 2020 at 1:24 pm

    Wow! This poem is beautiful beyond words!!!

    Liked by 2 people

  6. Madame Hellshadow and friends
    September 6, 2020 at 1:25 pm

    You are an amazing poet. I wish I could write like you.

    Liked by 2 people

    • September 6, 2020 at 1:35 pm

      Aw, shucks. I don’t know what to say right now! I feel flattered. Thank you for making my day. ❤ ❤

      Liked by 1 person

  7. September 6, 2020 at 2:29 pm

    This is so beautiful !!!! Evoking ! “I leave
    in a deeper silence
    alone to the fossils without a place…..” The fossils without a place….wow…beautiful Lucy!!

    Liked by 1 person

    • September 6, 2020 at 2:35 pm

      Aww, thank you! ☺️

      Like

      • September 6, 2020 at 3:20 pm

        Lucy, I forgot to say something in my previous comment, because I was struck beyond words by the beauty and the feeling of your poem. You inspire me! This poem, although it has darkness, it made me smile, because everything that is fragile and human it means life. Fragile, ephemeral, human. That’s what we are. Thank you for writing so beautifully and for making my heart beat faster while I am reading your words.

        Liked by 1 person

      • September 6, 2020 at 3:59 pm

        Oh, I truly have no words. Thank you greatly, Andrada. ❤ ❤ I feel humbled and honored.

        Liked by 1 person

      • September 6, 2020 at 4:09 pm

        ❤️

        Liked by 1 person

  8. September 6, 2020 at 3:49 pm

    You really seem ultra cool. Sorry for the seem, but no one truly knows. Thankyou for glancing at one of my poems, I, um, have just innocently started blogging and am quite vulnerable. After reading one of yours in return I know immediately that I want to read more, but I’m so tired right now. Let me just digest just the one for now and sleep on it. Talk about one epic girl huh, you really have a gentle heart of creativity bursting like a quasar. Till next time Lucy, and oh, thanks againx

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    • September 6, 2020 at 4:02 pm

      Thank you so, so much. 😀 I’m really appreciative of your kind feedback. Just wow! I feel flattered. ❤ ❤

      I also really enjoyed reading what you have up and I am looking forward to more.

      Liked by 1 person

      • September 12, 2020 at 9:39 am

        Cheers Lucy. Your words are a cool breeze. That may sound spun out but you have such depth, I’m stuck on the shore in the sunlight with fear of swimming too far out, but there I am paddling in your words. Lol, ‘ave a good one. Life Raft Lady. x

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      • September 12, 2020 at 9:44 am

        ❤️❤️

        Liked by 1 person

  9. September 6, 2020 at 5:38 pm

    Such beautifully mesmerising poetry. It takes me on a jouney through time and space. It has a noble quality that somehow speaks of salvation.

    Liked by 1 person

  10. September 7, 2020 at 3:07 am

    Hello Lucy… I your deep and frightening, but that’s probably me this week…. I’m feeling fragile and tender… however I loved your profound finale stanza,
    ” I leave
    in a deeper silence
    alone to the fossils without a place
    and to the thought of others…
    the ice pick at feet
    to each other from each other;
    therefore, death without a name
    but us.” 😀😎

    Liked by 1 person

    • September 7, 2020 at 8:21 am

      Hi Ivor. I’m very sorry to hear that and I hope you’re doing alright. Much love your way, my friend.

      Liked by 1 person

      • September 7, 2020 at 8:51 am

        I’ll be ok…. I’m just battling to stay focused and positive….

        Liked by 1 person

      • September 7, 2020 at 9:11 am

        💕

        Like

  11. September 7, 2020 at 8:28 am

    Woah, this is outstanding. My my💛

    Liked by 1 person

  12. September 7, 2020 at 6:54 pm

    This is incredible, Lucy. Truly.
    I loved all of it but especially:
    “The fall of man
    is a rarity from fear and falsity
    but as poetically a delusion
    to capture in the snow like a child;”

    Liked by 1 person

    • September 7, 2020 at 7:02 pm

      Oh, I thank you so much. I liked those lines too. 🥰

      Liked by 1 person

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