hot suns.

breasts upon a kumquat
sun
down from the pied-piper
in the woman’s moon, I’ve seen before

I can’t even recognize
when I rise from
the hot sun
until a dream takes
the land in sultry menace

upon the fire-flower’s
mouth to kiss.

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  18 comments for “hot suns.

  1. January 1, 2021 at 7:45 am

    Beautiful.

    Liked by 4 people

    • January 1, 2021 at 8:51 am

      Thank you!

      Like

      • SteelWarrior/PoetOfSteel
        January 1, 2021 at 4:19 pm

        I have no words…again.

        Liked by 1 person

      • January 1, 2021 at 5:39 pm

        Thank you so much!

        Liked by 1 person

  2. bokeh snow
    January 1, 2021 at 2:56 pm

    Hot damn, girly. This is GOOD!

    I especially love the phrase “sultry menace.”

    Liked by 4 people

  3. January 1, 2021 at 6:31 pm

    You are beyond talented 😍

    Liked by 4 people

  4. January 1, 2021 at 6:40 pm

    Gorgeous Lucy! Happy New Year.

    Liked by 3 people

  5. January 1, 2021 at 10:24 pm

    Breast upon a kumquat sun!! I love it Lucy!!

    Liked by 3 people

    • January 1, 2021 at 11:23 pm

      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked that line.

      Liked by 1 person

  6. silent poetry
    January 3, 2021 at 7:18 am

    This is gorgeous…. “upon the fire-flower’s
    mouth to kiss” beautiful ending ❤️

    Liked by 3 people

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