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  18 comments for “birth.

  1. January 10, 2021 at 7:30 am

    Haunting and lingering! I enjoyed it very much, Lucy :))

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  2. SteelWarrior/PoetOfSteel
    January 10, 2021 at 7:48 am

    Dang, with the word “Cruelly” at the beginning, it reminds me of on of my favorite lines:
    Parent: “I gave life to you!”
    Me: “I didn’t ask for this life!”
    Another great one, Lucy!

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  3. January 10, 2021 at 8:39 am

    Hi lucy! Really great poem! I loved it! ❤

    Liked by 2 people

    • January 10, 2021 at 12:21 pm

      Thank you immensely, Carol. ❤️❤️

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  4. January 10, 2021 at 11:26 am

    Love it!

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    • January 10, 2021 at 12:22 pm

      I’m happy to hear that! Thank you for reading my piece.

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  5. January 10, 2021 at 2:42 pm

    Visceral. That’s all that kept echoing in my mind as i read your lines.

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    • January 10, 2021 at 3:15 pm

      Thank you. 🙂

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  6. J. P. K. | Johandros Systems
    January 10, 2021 at 3:25 pm

    Burning into my eyes,
    the wor(l)ds of hurtful lives.
    Always scared to see “good” byes,
    scared of deadly hives.

    Liked by 2 people

    • January 10, 2021 at 3:36 pm

      Wow! This is so beautiful and evocative. Thank you for sharing. 💕

      Liked by 1 person

      • J. P. K. | Johandros Systems
        January 10, 2021 at 3:47 pm

        If it would only stop the mess. 💕 :/

        Liked by 1 person

      • January 10, 2021 at 3:47 pm

        Sadly, true.

        Liked by 1 person

  7. January 10, 2021 at 4:08 pm

    There’s a different take on the joys of bringing new life into this world.

    Liked by 2 people

  8. January 11, 2021 at 7:38 am

    Nice poem by the way!

    Liked by 2 people

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