in one key.

flower-envying
the day of the sea
for dance of tragedy in one key

bleeds, the root
and laz crawls like a dandelion.

shame, shame of the garden
born naked; wastrel-limbs
crawl rain,
winter of pearl sinking
feet

poisoning again
a body
breaking their wisps
and bones, come leaf,

god forbid if I meant it,
lies the stone where i look
through dooms of stars
and fragility of love

I give this womb an air
over the grave for you and I
above.

“So close that your sea rises with my heat” C.Perez ~ Love in a Time of Climate Change

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Written for the dVerse prompt: Choose ONE line and write your poem as continuation where the poet left off, thematically, in the same mood, rather than literally. Give special thought to your own final lines.




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28 replies

  1. This is vividly chilling Lucy… standing naked in a frosty winter garden…
    “shame, shame of the garden
    born naked; wastrel-limbs
    crawl rain,
    winter of pearl sinking
    feet”

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  2. I think we never really know how close we are to the grave… we might feel it sometimes like the damp breath of dusk, or catch the scent of the grave in passing… but maybe we have to ignore the abyss if want to keep walking,

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  3. Wow! This is deliciously dark and chilling, Lucy! Especially love; “god forbid if I meant it, lies the stone where i look through dooms of stars and fragility of love.” 💝💝

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  4. So dark and chilling. You are the expert at that, Lucy. No doubt about it! Wow!

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  5. lies the stone where i look
    through dooms of stars
    and fragility of love

    This passage is so splendid Lucy. Dark piece overall, but fascinating to read, as usual.

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  6. A very interesting and sad love poem. I see we were kindred spirits in our poem choice today! :>)

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  7. The subtle play between birth and death, the womb and the grave, come through very strongly in this piece, which was a fine way to follow the lines from Perez.

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  8. wastrel-limbs
    crawl rain,

    Wow… such an eerie poem…

    -David

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  9. I love the way you’ve riffed on the Perez line, Lucy, the ‘dance of tragedy in one key’ and the story of Eve’s shame or curse.

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  10. I always look forward to reading your poems, and this one didn’t disappoint!

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