“Sudden Goosebumps” by edenbray.

I can hear the babble and gaggle of the geese

hear them splash as they crash in water

hear their thumping

whirring wings

their tumult as more fly over

yet the air is still, empty

and you are standing there…


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7 replies

  1. Thank you for post and thank you for comment 🙂

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  2. Beautiful poem…wonderful Edenbray

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  3. Wow, very mysterious with a surprise ending! I wonder who you is….

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