I brought you flowers.

I brought you flowers
the rain is the face 
of a macadam// a moon
before abandonment grows
in the weeds

my mourning garden
shunning my hands in the absence
of throat weeds; and my bones are my father’s,
restless;
sheltered a sad death
in the thorns, my child,
the cat does not know penance
like you. A body’s destitution in the sun,
the delirium in her 
as plant prostitution 
of the ladybugs bind/twist 
like a redolent heart

I called her my garden
just once
the kind of dying 
that nobody wants

that nobody stalks for, and I did not beg 
to make you Snow White
as my father bedded dry soil,
no I just wanted to disencumber your faces
before I abandon you.

You overslept rain
I cannot outlive or love you
as I am tired
of each humiliation 
as your ghost rusts like madrigals,

like father always said—to add another to keep them out
but they danced in 
the spit of water
to be my death 
to keep the roses.

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Written for the 7/13/2021 dVerse prompt where we write a poem about gardening, or something germane to it. I based this piece on reality as I recently had a little garden bowl of cacti and succulents that my cats went into.

Yes, they’re fond of cacti and apparently masochism. I personally believe they used the thorns to pick their teeth with.

My garden of death (or what it will be if I don’t plant the remaining ones outside soon), how fitting.

I’m certain he is one of the culprits.

Also Happy 10th, dVerse. 🙂



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93 replies

  1. Oh.. i really connected the dots when I read about the backstory. I could never imagine that cats would be attracted to cacti. Some really cool lines here
    my child,
    the cat does not know penance
    like you

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  2. so good – what a nice idea to use the thorns as tooth pickers – your cats def. have some imagination 🙂

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  3. How wonderful to imagine your cats picking their teeth on cacti! They do do strange things…The poem is wonderful, a dark garden of deep-rooted sorrows.

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  4. Ohh this is incredibly vivid and oh so gripping, Lucy! I smiled at “thorns as toothpicks.” 🙂

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  5. Nice gritty piece. Hehe. The cats picked their teeth with the needles. Ah I would not put it past them.

    I called her my garden
    just once
    the kind of dying
    that nobody wants

    This rings of love, and plays interestingly with the three father references. Perhaps a father that did not teach love, but dust. I dunno, just trying to scratch a bit deeper.

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  6. Spectacular post . You are fabulous with your pen, Lu. The creativity of your imagination knows no bounds. 💗💖

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  7. I love your mourning garden of roses and thorns. I have cactus & succulents too but not cats. Thanks for joining in Lucy!

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  8. I love getting lost in your imaginative words, Lucy.

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  9. Ther5e are some very fine lines in this poem that especially truck me – too many to quote. I love the mourning garden, and “your ghost rusts like madrigals.” Wow.

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  10. “the rain is the face
    of a macadam”

    “throat weeds”

    “A body’s destitution in the sun,
    the delirium in her
    as plant prostitution
    of the ladybugs”

    “I did not beg
    to make you Snow White
    … I just wanted to disencumber your faces”

    “You overslept rain”

    These are killer lines. I’m imagining you visiting your mother’s grave, clearly having a great deal of unresolved issues between you.

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  11. Lucy, your poetry challenges me to dig deep, search for meaning I might not recognize with one read. Thank you for that. This poem is amazing.

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  12. Ahhhh, to keep the roses. From dying to regeneration. Beautiful, as always, dear Lucy. Love it.❤

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  13. Lovely cat and lovely poem. Death and rebirth–the cycle of life. I am sure the cat knows it all.

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  14. incredibly stunning Lucy xo

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  15. I love your poem Lucy! Your describe this garden so eloquently. I love your incorporating your cat into the poem.
    This is a great line… my child,
    the cat does not know penance
    like you.

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  16. I love the line “a moon / before abandonment grows/ in the weeds” Stunning! And “a cat does not know penance like you” 😀 Our cat wouldn’t know penance ever in any way like anyone. It’s a lovely poem full of surprising twists in language an imagery. Stark in its mourning.

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    • Aww, thank you so much. Honestly, that’s my favorite line too for some reason. I wanted to create abandonment imagery and it fit perfectly there. And hahaha, yeah cats are funny like that, they wouldn’t know penance if it came from the litter box. My first mistake was trusting mine lol.

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  17. By the look of the photo you chose, this cat doesn’t look too worse for wear. Thank you for explaining at the end, Lucy.

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  18. So so incredible! There were so many exceptional lines in this poem. And the way you ended it, ‘to be my death, to keep the roses’, just awesome. Loved it ❤

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  19. Your brain is a wicked wonder – cuttingly creative, with a vicious, vivid vitality – a dark beauty.

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  20. Grief is a cultivation, tended with care and growing a fresh drop of cold ocean. -Brendan

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  21. That was a wonderful read!! (despite its backstory being cats and their defiance😂)
    Thank you!

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  22. Some exquisite lines lines Lucy and I thought I was going to a dark place. As always, your words make me sit up and think! I was happy to see the funny side of it and your cats being the culprits. Toothpicks indeed! 🤣 LOL

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  23. Loved my wander through your garden of words, as do I always Lucy.
    “I cannot outlive or love you
    as I am tired
    of each humiliation”
    This section jumped out, perhaps out of context, but it resonated for me as the lament of a spurned lover, still pining. I think perhaps because I had that experience with my first wife. In fact, we took turns sharing that experience. They other couldn’t or wouldn’t leave the other’s reality, and yet the relationship, while addictive, was toxic.
    I can see your cat getting pricked on the nose by a cactus needle, and the head snapping back, paw swiping at the air — but after a pause, the cat going right back in. Cats are curious and persistent, often to a fault.
    BTW: your cat looks identical to a cat Kathy and I had for 14 years. Her name was Taja. Purely a house cat. She was pure black, golden eyes, and had a perfect little white diamond in the exact middle of her chest, just below her neck. She was cool! Cancer got her… 😕

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    • Rob, thank you so much for your lovely words and thoughts. I can see how those lines resonated with you, and it’s interesting because I didn’t initially see it that way but now I do. That’s really tragic and indeed toxic.

      Hehe, yeah, cats are anything if not resilient. Guess why the saying goes, curiosity killed the cat.

      Oh my, she sounds so gorgeous and I’m glad you were all able to give her a happy life. I’m so sorry cancer got her, that is a heartbreaking experience to go through with a pet. Mine is 11 years old and I am trying to cherish every moment with him I have.

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  24. I loved the line “my mourning garden”, and how it takes such a different meaning once you explained the backstory. Wonderful poem(s given the change), thank you.

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  25. oh, you grabbed me with the title / first verse and never let go ~

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  26. Nice poetry and I love your black cat as well. Lovely ❤️

    It would be grateful if you could visit my blog as well.

    https://mystorytellings.com

    Thanks a lot. 🥰

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  27. Beautifully formed and expressed ❣️

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  28. What a very imaginative poem! Love your creativity much! Thorns as toothpicks- clever 😉😊

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  29. An amazing piece of work Lucy, wonderful in every aspect. Your imagination and the way you tell it to the readers is amazing. Thankyou

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  30. I had a black cat too. We named him Schatten. He destroyed my roses. He kept tipping the vase over with his paws. I have it on video somewhere. It always makes me smile. Black cats are so playful. Awww yours is gorgeous. I hope your flowers survive!

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  31. Hi Lucy, I enjoyed “I brought you flowers.” I would also like to thank you for stopping by my page. It always means a lot to me when you visit because of my admiration for your work. Your style is different from my own and it expands my awareness of what language can do when I read your poems. That and cats.

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  32. Thank you so much for sharing! ❤

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